Post by DoritoBurrito on May 3, 2013 20:56:50 GMT -5
Here is Lucid. I like the first half of his story, but the second half of his Story kinda gets a little OP. If he gets picked for his own episode, I'll try and talk to him to see if he's cool with us making any changes.
Name: Lucid (names himself "The Shieldbearer" later)
Age: 21 (though at the beginning of the story he is a filly of about 9)
Race: Unicorn
Sex: Stallion
Height: A little taller than the usual unicorn (by the end of the story)
Hometown: Everfree Forest (a small cottage)
Likes: He likes dark places. He also loves ambient music.
Dislikes: Being alone. He wants at least one good friend with him at all times (he endures not having one during most of the story though)
Physical Description: (refer to picture)
Personality: Softspoken and solemn, but is very outspoken when confronting someone.
Occupation: Hired bodyguard (this is after the story, however.)
Cutie mark: A black shield with two lightning bolts being deflected off.
Bio: Born in the Everfree Forest, Lucid was always encouraged by his father to be outgoing and try new things, visit new places, etc, just like his mother, who was constantly exploring the world, mapping new places.
Lucid was afraid of everything that moved where he lived, so his father gave him a small wooden shield.
He went deep into the Everfree Forest, where he found himself caught against several timberwolves.
He screamed out and ran, and tried as hard as he could to protect himself with the small shield, but the timberwolves were on his heels, and his father then found him and dealt with a few of the timberwolves, but it was an entire pack of them.
His father simply told him to run away, and he did. They never saw each other again.
After making it to Ponyville, he decided to get the strongest shield ever to be seen.
So he found a strong, black material deep inside a cave (diamond dogs' cave before the diamond dogs took it over), and paid a blacksmith to create a shield out of every bit of the material.
The shield ended up being far too heavy. So Lucid told him not to sell the shield, but keep it for him until he could carry it.
He left straight for Canterlot to be trained by the Royal Guard to be stronger than any other unicorn. It was terribly rigorous work, but eventually he could lift a ton or two with no trouble.
He went back to the blacksmith and took the shield, where he could lift it with almost no problem, both with his back and with his magic.
He then swore to himself to never EVER let a friend of his be hurt by evil. With surprise, he earned his Cutie Mark. He then began calling himself "The Shieldbearer", though long-time friends call him Lucid.
Other stuff: At first, when he gets his shield, he is fairly clumsy carrying it, and any time it dropped it made a loud ringing sound, almost always leaving a small crater in the ground (it is VERY heavy.)
After obtaining the shield, he wanders the edge of Ponyville and the Everfree Forest.
(OC belong to: Stephen Wilson)
Name: Lucid (names himself "The Shieldbearer" later)
Age: 21 (though at the beginning of the story he is a filly of about 9)
Race: Unicorn
Sex: Stallion
Height: A little taller than the usual unicorn (by the end of the story)
Hometown: Everfree Forest (a small cottage)
Likes: He likes dark places. He also loves ambient music.
Dislikes: Being alone. He wants at least one good friend with him at all times (he endures not having one during most of the story though)
Physical Description: (refer to picture)
Personality: Softspoken and solemn, but is very outspoken when confronting someone.
Occupation: Hired bodyguard (this is after the story, however.)
Cutie mark: A black shield with two lightning bolts being deflected off.
Bio: Born in the Everfree Forest, Lucid was always encouraged by his father to be outgoing and try new things, visit new places, etc, just like his mother, who was constantly exploring the world, mapping new places.
Lucid was afraid of everything that moved where he lived, so his father gave him a small wooden shield.
He went deep into the Everfree Forest, where he found himself caught against several timberwolves.
He screamed out and ran, and tried as hard as he could to protect himself with the small shield, but the timberwolves were on his heels, and his father then found him and dealt with a few of the timberwolves, but it was an entire pack of them.
His father simply told him to run away, and he did. They never saw each other again.
After making it to Ponyville, he decided to get the strongest shield ever to be seen.
So he found a strong, black material deep inside a cave (diamond dogs' cave before the diamond dogs took it over), and paid a blacksmith to create a shield out of every bit of the material.
The shield ended up being far too heavy. So Lucid told him not to sell the shield, but keep it for him until he could carry it.
He left straight for Canterlot to be trained by the Royal Guard to be stronger than any other unicorn. It was terribly rigorous work, but eventually he could lift a ton or two with no trouble.
He went back to the blacksmith and took the shield, where he could lift it with almost no problem, both with his back and with his magic.
He then swore to himself to never EVER let a friend of his be hurt by evil. With surprise, he earned his Cutie Mark. He then began calling himself "The Shieldbearer", though long-time friends call him Lucid.
Other stuff: At first, when he gets his shield, he is fairly clumsy carrying it, and any time it dropped it made a loud ringing sound, almost always leaving a small crater in the ground (it is VERY heavy.)
After obtaining the shield, he wanders the edge of Ponyville and the Everfree Forest.
(OC belong to: Stephen Wilson)